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maybe top
maybe not

question is
a suggestion
pushing an idea
giving a chance
to be a different
breed

an opportunity to
change
a way to breathe
a way to see
that's foreign to
me

different gender
different view
different body
same you

slender, tender
visual pretender

a magic brew
to change how they all see
you

like a branding tattoo
wrongly branded you

disavow, you seal your lips
like a solar eclipse
it overshadows you
encloses you

silence...
I wrote this about 2 months ago and recently learned how to post writing so I figure I'll post some of my old stuff
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bobkitty1123 Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Wow...something about this is just incredible. This makes me want to open up word and make my own masterpiece but it would be hard to write anything as meaning and as well-written as this. :)
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Panda-54 Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
Thank you so much! :) i wrote this over the course of a day, soon after I became Andy. :)
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bobkitty1123 Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Well, Andy just seems to be working for you. :D Welcome.
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Panda-54 Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
:)
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RezReloaded Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
I like this very much.
I can definitely relate to this.
Thank you for posting~~
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Panda-54 Featured By Owner May 4, 2011
Thank you! :)
You're welcome :)
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